Packing my bags for...

In Room 7 on Fridays we had Mrs Wylde teaching us. She read us the poem " Packing My Bags For Mars" by James Norcliffe. She then made us write our own poem in the style he wrote his except we had to make it about a different place. Here is MY poem.

Success criteria:

WALT Develop our own poem in ( packing my bags for mars By James Norcliffe. WALT use increasingly  descriptive vocabulary to add interest to our writing. WALT have some fun and use creative ideas and our imagination.

Packing my bags for the Underworld

One heavy metallic, 

Shiny metal suitcase 

Full of cotton fibres woven into 

Lightweight flameproof metal

To carry my flameproof clothes

So they don’t melt

One special, homemade

Shiny smooth, heat resistant

Air filtering, respirator for breathing clear cool energy giving air

So I don’t suffocate

One precious,

From the heart, golden

Embroidered with diamonds

Bracelet worn around my wrist

So I don’t forget about home

One hallow infused

Sunray and Moonlight

Made from the finest of the

Heavens core,

 Crystal to  fend off the creatures of the underworld

Keeping me safe

One precious friend

So I am never alone

By Emma. B