Hello Emma it's Breanna from Karoro School. Your writing is amazing, I like how you said that the waves were like foamy whipped cream. It made me think of the time when I poured a glass of milk I piled a bunch of whipped cream on top it was amazing.
Hello Breanna. Thank you for your positive and thoughtful comment. You didn't put anything helpful in your comment but it was a good comment but the helpful would make it even better.
Hello Emma it's Breanna from Karoro School. Your writing is amazing, I like how you said that the waves were like foamy whipped cream. It made me think of the time when I poured a glass of milk I piled a bunch of whipped cream on top it was amazing.
ReplyDeleteHello Breanna. Thank you for your positive and thoughtful comment. You didn't put anything helpful in your comment but it was a good comment but the helpful would make it even better.
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