Monday 1 April 2019

If I Had Wings

For the past few weeks we have been doing poetry. This week's task was a poem if I had wings. First we had to answer some questions and then colour in the piece of paper with the poem. We had to use sticky (Interesting) language, the five senses and interesting verbs and nouns. Here is my poem.


1 comment:

  1. Hi Emma I love this poem. You have definitely met the success criteria of writing a poem that uses the senses, some language features and some interesting language and ideas. I love the sense of imagination and humour in this poem. My favourite line is the one about the mortals clinging to earth as I think this is an interesting concept. Ka rawe.

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